my papa
my papa is as funny as a clown, on a unicycle but some
joke’s are lame very lame. but funny, and at new year’s eve. he blows fire and sometime’s. we play. fight and he gives as toy’s specialty. he’s a good guy. and I like his house
it’s tidy he is a really nice guy and his favorite meat is lamb on a spit. He likes to joke around a lot of the time. He is a great papa and I like going around to his house a lot of the time.
The end by Corban Whitten

Your Poppa sounds like a great guy!
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