Sunday, 23 March 2014

camp Writing






                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

















1 comment:

  1. I can see you had a great experience in the caves Corban. Remember to check spelling for accuracy as it was a challenge to decode at times and I missed your messages. I liked your use of similes and metaphors. My legs were jelly was a great sentence to let me know how much effort you put in.

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