WALT: Entertain
Description: We read a story called “The Important Book” written by Margarent Wise Brown. We looked at the structure of this writing and decided to use this to create our own writing.
Task: Choose an object to describe, using the same structure as Margaret Wise Brown in “The Important Book.”
Criteria:
Brainstorm your ideas describing the object that you have chosen. Use full sentences.
Choose the most important thing.
Make sure that your first sentence and last sentence are the same.
List the ways you describe your object using a comma to separate your ideas.
Edit your work for punctuation, ideas and spelling.
Image:
Evaluation:
What are you most proud of and why? the fianl pice
What challenged you the most and why? getting the ideas and need better spalling and
and more punctuation
Feedback/Feedforward:maybe next time you you could ask someone to check your writing and i like your editing.
The Important Book
Hi Corban,
ReplyDeleteI didn't know anything about a slider before I read your writing!
When you are writing, I want you to think really carefully about the use of capital letters in your sentences. When do we use them? What is the purpose? This needs to be your next focus that we get sorted before you go off to Intermediate.