I love the beginning of your story Corban. Your use of personification here hooks the reader! How do you think you have gone with making your writing make sense and using fullstops? For a published piece these things are important. They help your reader get your message. Have this in mind on your next piece of writing.
I love the beginning of your story Corban. Your use of personification here hooks the reader! How do you think you have gone with making your writing make sense and using fullstops? For a published piece these things are important. They help your reader get your message. Have this in mind on your next piece of writing.
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